
How to enjoy a poem?
- Shubhankar Nath
- Poem
- December 29, 2022
Open disclaimer at first - I am no expert at poetry. I am not going to tell you how to judge a poem, lest alone write one. In retrospect, this is my short attempt to introduce you to the world of complexities in poetry - more of a tasting guide. How to look for, to make your poetic experience richer.
Condensation
Poems present ideas in a condensed form. It is the length, that is the foremost character that differentiates it from a prose. Every word must be frugally picked, but it still should convey a lot. Notice how easily the poet is trying provide strength of will to the reader, and saying a lot in just a couple of lines, that is the magic in poetry.
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinewTo serve your turn long after they are gone,
And so hold on when there is nothing in you
Except the Will which says to them: ‘Hold on!’
- Rudyard Kipling
Rhyme, Rhythm and Meter
Focus on your heartbeat, what do you notice? We are creatures of rhythm and repetition. It is the very essence of us being alive. Pattern provides pleasure, so evidently in language too we look for it. Rhythm is the building block of poetry. It is constructed using the emphasis on syllables that repeat. Notice the “o” sound on:
Snap back to realityOh, there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that easy, no
He won't have it, he knows his whole back's to these ropes
- Eminem
Rhyme on the other hand has nothing to do with patterns or spaced repetitions. It just similar sounding syllables. It also needs to be metered in sizable lengths of line endings. All three combined, provide the building block of any poetry.
Leaping higher, higher, higher,With a desperate desire,
And a resolute endeavor
Now - now to sit, or never,
- Allen Poe
Visuals
A good poem, should be able to paint a picture in your mind. They do it via metaphors. It is an unrealistic comparison, but has all the necessary weight to pull the visual. Notice how she is talking about walking as if she had a backyard of gold mine. First of all, nobody has a goldmine in their backyard and secondly if you did, you would still walk the same. But the framing of the words definitely cure towards her confidence in her oneself.
Does my haughtiness offend you?Don't you take it awful hard
’Cause I laugh like I've got gold mines
Diggin’ in my own backyard.
- Maya Angelou
Why modern poetry is dead?
The best art always was a child of hard times. People who survive hard times, have very intense experience. Their experience is often reflected in poems. A good poem, challenges rudimentary thinking, and must be thought provoking. All the greatest social movements always had poem riding along.
In modern life, such depth of experience is rare. We do not have time to slow down and experience evenings. It has become safe to live and we have more free time at our hands, poets have lost the charm of a drastic life event.
Instead, poetry have become a personal sorrow outburst rather than a lens to the world. Moreover, it is tough to write a poem fitting the contours of all the above parameters, it is handwork. That is why, good poems are always classics. We have modern songs which are poetic, but don’t evoke the same level of emotions, that retros do.